Photo 8 of 8 from My first Map in progress

Cairemia and Darlandis

This is the first rough of a map for a novel I'm almost ready to publish. When the map is done the book is ready. I'd love tips and advice. I have a dotted line section that is a "mountain range" that from the east looking west is more like a ridge, and from the west looking east more like a mountain range. Any ideas on how to make that look good? Help (and or examples) would be appreciated.

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11-07-2012, 08:40 PM
My first Map in progress
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