View Full Version : The world of Teodd
07-13-2010, 06:39 AM
This is commissioned map.
Somme river forks, I know... I have to follow the hand sketch.
But my purpose is to work on forests texture and colours.
Enjoy, C&C welcomed :D
07-13-2010, 09:22 AM
Overall I think it's a pretty darn nice job.
The basic grass color is a little neon-y for my tastes but that's a minor thing.
07-13-2010, 01:14 PM
You've got a really good start on this. The greens are a little intense, but the longer I look at it, the more they grow on me. I really like the shape you've given the terrain/coasts, but I think the mountains could use some work. They look to me like rock walls. And is it my allergies, or is the full-size map looking a little blurry?
07-13-2010, 02:28 PM
It's not your allergies. ;) The text is really crisp, but some of the terrain is overly blurry.
07-13-2010, 05:08 PM
Pretty much agree with what's been said but regarding the forests (which is really what you seemed to be looking for) it seems a bit flat. You might want to generate some cloud noise beneath the forested areas to give them some depth so it's not quite so one-colored. Might want to hit it with some burn/dodge as well. Noise can also create little flecks that can look a bit like leaves if you tint them correctly.
I like they layout you have going with the land and so on, keep up the good work.
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