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Rythal
09-26-2010, 02:57 PM
So before I go posting this on the finished forum, I'd figure Id get your guys input on this map. I'm thinking about making the trees darker, but that will be a fair bit of work, so what do you guys think?

thanks in advance!

Steel General
09-27-2010, 07:05 AM
I think the tree color is fine, my suggestion would be to get rid of the 'olive-colored' circles around the city, etc. markers and replace it with a thin dark stroke.

Djekspek
09-28-2010, 05:06 PM
Agree with SG, the trees look fine to me too. My suggestion would be to ease on the white label and compass (maybe a little opacity?) and move the compass a little out of the way (maybe smaller and move bottom-down more). cheers!

Rythal
09-29-2010, 06:05 PM
Thanks a ton!

Howz dis? is the text too bold do you think?

Steel General
09-30-2010, 07:21 AM
I'd reduce the stroke/outline around the text. Little 'over-the-top' in my opinion. A 1 or 2 pixel stroke/outline is probably enough.

Rythal
10-10-2010, 11:58 PM
good grief, this went all the way to the second page.

Anyways, lessened the outline around the text. better?

also exported it as a png instead of a jpg

Steel General
10-11-2010, 07:35 AM
I think it's much better.

arakish
10-11-2010, 01:17 PM
Agreed. Especially the text. It looks much better.

Cool map.

rmfr

Marken4
10-11-2010, 01:26 PM
Like the vectorstyled mountains. Have some rep for thinking outside the box.

Rythal
10-12-2010, 06:41 PM
Excellent, I think I'll call it done. :)

Finished map here (http://www.cartographersguild.com/showthread.php?12187-Ilithuhn)