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11-28-2010, 01:50 PM
Here is the second map of my RPG creation "Outreterre". It is situated at the south of the world, and fill with plenty of undead organised according to a medievalistic hierarchy.
Some have been suggested in my first map to insert more names into the map. That wasn't possible because of the situation of the first land, but here, I have tried to insert some in this one. I don't know how the result is like for your experimented eyes... I personnaly am quite proud with this one, conserning it is my second map only. I am still in search for suggesting, like how to improve how to place my places names...


PS: I have been using the Saderan tuto again! (I really like it!)

11-28-2010, 06:48 PM
Very nice, the palette is very pretty. Might wanna put a glow or something around the task so that it is a little more clear.

11-29-2010, 01:53 AM
that's good stuff
go on this way
here a suggestion to improve your skills
you should try to find a way to differentiate more the textures
between plains and wood
now you have some kind of same grain all over the map
which make it very coherent graphically
but maybe a little bit dull
this may be very tricky
because you don't want your map become a patchwork of textures

continue comme ša mon gars
et bonne chance

11-29-2010, 05:07 AM
looking good, nice colors and good shapes. The only thing that struck me was the double road north of centural mountains. :) .. and have some rep :)

11-29-2010, 08:10 AM
Yes thats a superb map. I find the text a little hard to read as the font is quite intricate. But its a very nice, clear map.

11-29-2010, 03:31 PM
Thank you all for your comments! I'll take note of all you're saying.
I didn't see the road was doubled in this place, thank you for noticing! And i'll look for another style for my forests...