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Cartioni
04-25-2011, 11:50 AM
this is my first finished map, i got a bit lazy in the end :P
anyway i decided to share it and see what u guys have to say about my first attempt.

jtougas
04-25-2011, 11:57 AM
Overall it's really good. I'm always envious of the guys who make the nice first maps. (you should have seen some of my first attempts). I do have a couple of suggestions for you.
1.An outline around your landmasses would help them "pop" a bit more.
2. Your rivers look a bit like "rope" laid across the top of your land you could try a "bevel" filter on them. Also rivers at this scale would be about the same color as the shallower parts of your oceans (this is not technically realistic but it is a pleasing visual effect)

Your mountains and other terrain features look great. Are you planning on labeling this? Either way its a great first map. :)

Cartioni
04-25-2011, 01:18 PM
thanks jtougas, and about the landmass i know its ugly but by the time i finished the mountains i got lazy, and the river lets just say i just added them in paint :D
hopefully the next maps would be an improvement.