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Redwan
05-17-2011, 06:33 AM
So this is my first map, it is still unfinished - done only half (need mountains, rivers,towns, labels,etc).

http://s005.radikal.ru/i211/1105/c0/0b181eef656dt.jpg (http://radikal.ru/F/s005.radikal.ru/i211/1105/c0/0b181eef656d.jpg.html)

It is done straightly by tutorials, with several alterations. Well, don`t know what else to say. Critisize and give advice.

SilenBlade
05-17-2011, 12:37 PM
IMHO the shore is too rugged it looks unnatural in 100% zoom, also try to do more shallow water (a little bit more white) near coast line. Keep doing and it will be really a great map :)

Seraphine_Harmonium
05-17-2011, 06:29 PM
IMHO the shore is too rugged it looks unnatural in 100% zoom, also try to do more shallow water (a little bit more white) near coast line. Keep doing and it will be really a great map :)
It's a bit pixelated at the edges at full view. I would suggest either making the "full view" size a bit smaller so that that isn't the case, or more ideally, to increase the resolution and smooth the edges out a bit. I am not suggesting taking out the detail on the coastline--far from it--but I am suggesting that the details be cleaner, if that makes sense.