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Dorel
06-27-2011, 02:50 PM
So I am making this map for a novel I'm writing and I wanted to get other people's input. Is it any good? Do you have any suggestions? Love to hear from you, and thanks in advance.

-Dorel

Ascension
06-27-2011, 04:05 PM
If this continent is on the northern hemisphere then you have a desert far too north in the northwest. The swamp rivers seem to be flowing inland. But overall, I like it. Don't see many lands laid out so wide like that, kind of a novel idea (at least to me eyes since I don't read that many fantasy books). If you were to flip this around and make it a southern hemisphere continent then the swamp might have to get moved depending on that little bit of land in the southwest - it it's a full continent then things might just be fine.

Dorel
06-27-2011, 10:09 PM
I reworked my map a little according to your advice. I expanded the map and moved the desert into the bottom continent, also I fixed the rivers around the swamp. I also put it onto an old paper background. I'd like to hear what you have to say about this one. Thanks
-Dorel

Ascension
06-27-2011, 10:22 PM
Pretty good now. Is the rest of the map going to match what you have going for the forests and cartouche?