View Full Version : The Lost Valley (Lite Challenge Entry)
07-20-2011, 07:55 AM
I didn't get around to adding a few minor things to my entry (WIP Thread (http://www.cartographersguild.com/showthread.php?15183-June-July-Lite-Challenge-Entry-The-Lost-Valley)) before the challenge closed, so here's the final-and-I-won't-touch-it-again map:
07-20-2011, 04:50 PM
I always like flavor text. Good stuff, man.
07-20-2011, 05:47 PM
Nice map dude. It would be cool so see a follow-up map from the second expedition too.
It's a really nice and clear map, and the reader/writer in me likes all the text too. My only very minor gripe is I think those lines pointing to the points of interest would be better in a different colour or with a stroke. As they cross the black outer map border, they lose a tiny bit of clarity which I guess is I find most noticeable because the rest of it is so clearly defined.
07-21-2011, 02:39 AM
Thanks guys. - Larb, you make an excellent point about those lines. I have an idea on how to fix that - will try it tonight when I am back home.
07-23-2011, 01:30 PM
The Gateway text has a typo. The word "followed" is missing the "d".
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