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bartmoss
07-20-2011, 06:55 AM
I didn't get around to adding a few minor things to my entry (WIP Thread (http://www.cartographersguild.com/showthread.php?15183-June-July-Lite-Challenge-Entry-The-Lost-Valley)) before the challenge closed, so here's the final-and-I-won't-touch-it-again map:

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Ascension
07-20-2011, 03:50 PM
I always like flavor text. Good stuff, man.

vman3force
07-20-2011, 04:47 PM
Nice map dude. It would be cool so see a follow-up map from the second expedition too.

Larb
07-20-2011, 05:01 PM
It's a really nice and clear map, and the reader/writer in me likes all the text too. My only very minor gripe is I think those lines pointing to the points of interest would be better in a different colour or with a stroke. As they cross the black outer map border, they lose a tiny bit of clarity which I guess is I find most noticeable because the rest of it is so clearly defined.

bartmoss
07-21-2011, 01:39 AM
Thanks guys. - Larb, you make an excellent point about those lines. I have an idea on how to fix that - will try it tonight when I am back home.

rdanhenry
07-23-2011, 12:30 PM
Cool.

The Gateway text has a typo. The word "followed" is missing the "d".