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Rafalenal
09-08-2011, 01:21 PM
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv347/rafalenal/illustrations/Anatoliaregionmap.jpg

A region map for my campaign module. Tell me what you guys think, critique is appreciated.

Ascension
09-08-2011, 05:44 PM
All I can think of is maybe more forests, this is a northerly cold area so I would expect more. Otherwise, looks plausible and good.

Hai-Etlik
09-08-2011, 07:13 PM
The blurry text halos don't really match the otherwise plain ink look of the map. Maybe try hard edged ones a bit tighter to the text?

Diamond
09-08-2011, 11:46 PM
Yep, I agree with Hai. The blurriness is kind of jarring. Also, where the rivers cross some of the bigger text, like those two in Anatolia, I'd extend them closer to the text. As it stands now, they almost look like four rivers, not two. Also, you forgot to capitalize the 'r' in the Anatolian Range. Speaking of the text, it might also be a good idea to leave an extra space in between words, since with the letter spacing you've got now, the separate words sort of run into each other.

Other than those nitpicks, it looks really good to me.