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Sapiento
09-09-2011, 05:49 AM
A personal project, done in PS.

ravells
09-09-2011, 09:36 AM
Looks great, Sap!

torstan
09-09-2011, 10:16 AM
Looks good. I like the city walls and the town layout. I'd recommend varying the size of blocks inside the town, and the houses themselves. At the moment it looks like everything within the city walls is the same size which implies the same economic level everywhere. Also, the roads inside the city are massive compared to the roads outside the walls. I'd expect roads outside to be wider, as space within the city walls is at a premium.

Love the colour scheme and the details in the farmland too. Very nice!

Jaxilon
09-09-2011, 11:16 AM
Yeah this is great Sap. I especially like the outside areas with the small farming buildings and whatnot.

Hugo Solis
09-09-2011, 05:26 PM
Nothing like good farmilng land outside a walled city. Looks great!

Great comments Torstan, didn't noticed it until you mentioned it, you have quite the trained eye!

Sapiento
09-10-2011, 01:37 AM
Thank you guys!

@Torstan: really good comments, hadn't noticed the streets and the houses issues. I will take care of these in the next town map.

Steel General
09-16-2011, 07:12 AM
Cool stuff Sap!

Sapiento
09-16-2011, 07:28 AM
Thanx, Steel General!

bartmoss
09-16-2011, 07:47 AM
I like the map - my critique is that I hate that font, it's too.... ordinary? uninteresting? Also, I read the name as "City of Boons", but that's my mental problem :-)

Sapiento
09-17-2011, 04:19 AM
I like the map - my critique is that I hate that font, it's too.... ordinary? uninteresting? Also, I read the name as "City of Boons", but that's my mental problem :-)

I tried various fonts before I decided for this one. I think it fits well with the style of the map. Matter of taste.