View Full Version : Valley of Lakes

10-02-2011, 04:25 PM
I have been throwing this idea around for a couple of years actually, but I could never get the lakes quite right.... Then I was doodling some islands, and I realized that they would work much better as lakes.


I would like feedback. I need to know if it is too hard to read and how to fix that. Please criticize!

10-02-2011, 07:20 PM
I can dig it in theory but the swirly and crisp text doesn't mesh with the sketchy-style mountains. A sketchy or handwritten font would work, though, with some minor blurring.