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DarkJackalX
01-27-2012, 06:24 AM
Hey Everyone!
I am a long time lurker and lover of the Cartographers' Guild. I am brand new at this and this is my first attempt to make something. I am looking for improvement so please by all means give me feedback and constructive criticism, I can take it! This is version 1.0, I will post updates as I make them.

v1 - Things to Update
Add Compass Rose
Add Legend
Improve Border
Add Additional Towns
Add Landmarks
Add Roads
Add Trade Routes ?
Improve "Clutteriness" of Title
Change City Marker Pink Glow

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RobA
02-01-2012, 03:14 PM
Hi DarkJackalX -

This forum is typically reserved for finished maps, rather than Works in Progress. If you want, one of the CL's can move this post to the WIP forums...

-Rob A>

Thesslian
02-01-2012, 05:17 PM
Well, just looking at it I would say your water is a bit too bright and makes the map kind of hard to look at. The text in the ocean is hard to read. You have spiffy looking decorations in the water that I would darken to make a little more pronounced. A few rivers might be in order too, if just to give the towns a visible source of water.