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Phlimm
07-03-2012, 02:56 AM
OK so here is my first run at an RPG Campaign World Map. Please critique as honestly as possible.

Thanks! :)

EDIT: I decided to remove all the complicated island section in the south. Which do you think is better?


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rdanhenry
07-03-2012, 06:57 AM
Complicated is good. Unless you want that bay for something, I'd keep the one on the left.

arsheesh
07-03-2012, 06:25 PM
Nice outline but the outline stroke is a bit too thick. As to the islands, I don't really have a preference either way.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh