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Kasaichi
12-10-2012, 08:15 PM
Is that looks good? :mrgreen:
If not - tell me what is Your idea to improve it's look.

That's that map:
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atpollard
12-10-2012, 08:58 PM
I like it.
The only suggestion that I can make is to vary the line thicknesses more.
Some lines are more important than others and the line weight should reflect that.

eViLe_eAgLe
12-11-2012, 07:31 PM
That is line-ist, all lines are equal.

Jokes aside, I like it and think it could be refined and made awesome. (I also agree with atpollard about the line weight.)

Midgardsormr
12-13-2012, 12:47 PM
I really like the style and the line quality; it reminds me of the kinds of illustrations that were made for the adventure stories of the early to mid 1900's. I think the color might be a bit garish. I'd tone down the green, at least. While you might be able to find a pigment that was that bright on the paper when first applied, by the time the edges of the page were that distressed, I should expect the color to have faded quite a bit. That is only an opinion, though, and I almost always think things should be desaturated.

daemaree
12-17-2012, 09:20 PM
I like it overall, but the yellow does hurt my eyes a bit.