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Will Brawner
03-02-2013, 10:05 PM
On my last map I tried going for a photorealistic look, so for this one I decided to go more storybook style. I hope you like the visual effects and the sound of the names I picked out for cities. Please send back any criticism you might have. Thanks.



03-03-2013, 06:33 AM
A very own style of map. Cartoon-ish in my eyes. I like it!

Is there more of this world? Care to tell us a bit about it?

Have some Rep.!

03-03-2013, 06:53 PM

Like it too :)

Maybe a bit pixelization in mountains and hills ? Regarding the rest of the settings, at any rate.

The font is also a bit too dark. By adding a bit of transparency, it would be a bit less sharp ?

Anyway, good-looking map ! The colour contrasts is eye-candy for me.

03-04-2013, 08:18 AM
I like the way you represent the cities with different buildings to make them unique. The Empire of Vacarro is only one island, right? That's kinda funny.:D
The mountains seem to be a bit pixelized, indeed. The Cartoon style is quite nice. I'd make the names of the states more pale and maybe you could add some kind of borders to the kingdoms?

- Max -
03-05-2013, 08:03 AM
I like the land shapes. Fixing the pixellated mountains, working a bit more on land colours and on labels would give the map a real first improvement.