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MYung
04-19-2013, 12:26 PM
Hi I'm new here and wanted to show you my first map I'm working on currently. I would like to know what you think of the style and what would improve. Thank you.

http://www.loaditup.de/files/766700_s4pabk6649.jpg

jturner
04-19-2013, 07:34 PM
Hello Myung, this is nice. I really like the legend. Did you draw the flower patterns in the border? Very nice. Your colour choice is great, too, and I like the paper effect. At first I thought that, as it seems like a large-scale map, you might want to randomise/distort the coastline a little - it seems a bit smooth. On the other hand, it does make the map very distinctive.