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AMXPariah
05-31-2013, 01:15 PM
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Finally, it is done! This is Amelia's Grove *dramatic music* No colors, but I hope to gain some skill in that area and post an updated version at some point. Enjoy :)

- Max -
05-31-2013, 01:25 PM
The overall layout is nice and I like the way you did the farms. Though in my humble opinion the city layout itself appears maybe too regular/repetitive. Adding some details (two sided roofs, chymneys, slight shadows on floor, walls/towers details and so) and labels could have make it more eyes-attractive and make it more "finished".

AMXPariah
05-31-2013, 01:45 PM
For my next map, how would you suggest I make the city layout more unique?

- Max -
05-31-2013, 01:49 PM
Don't get me wrong, the layout is nice, just a bit repetitive. Like I said, I'd add more details (especially if you don't color it) and make the blocks less regular to break the "pattern" effect.

AMXPariah
05-31-2013, 01:58 PM
Either way, thank you for the feedback :)

- Max -
05-31-2013, 02:15 PM
No problem, I hope it will help on your nexts maps. Keep the good job up :)