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foremost
07-23-2013, 04:13 PM
Hey everyone :)

Just thought I'd share what I had been working on for some time. It might be colored in the future, but for now I am done!

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foremost
10-14-2013, 09:58 AM
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I didn't like how the borders were extra-wide at the top and bottom, and felt it was needless to title it if the title is in the thread. Also what to bump it back up to the "New Posts" to hopefully get some feedback. :)

I imagine this village would be more of a wealthy residence than not, with some many rock-walls and gardens. Also, it could support fishing or a checkpoint for ship-travel.

-fm

galdre
10-14-2013, 02:15 PM
I like the layout. I would keep the title too; you would want someone to identify the name if they saved the image.

The numbered key is a good idea, but I don't think you need the key on the bottom right; what is forest, river, etc. is obvious because of the way you drew them.

foremost
10-14-2013, 09:08 PM
Good points, galdre... I just don't like the way I wrote the title I guess.

I suppose the forest symbol is rather obvious :P