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Clercon
10-01-2013, 06:04 PM
This is a commission I made for a Swedish RPG some time ago. The world consisted of two large islands and I think you all can see where the bad people live :)
The map is made in CC3 in the very popular style made by Djekspek here on the forum. Some small stuff are added in PS as well.
Hope you like it.
:)

Lingon
10-02-2013, 03:44 AM
Great piece! Really nice textures and colors. Personally, I'd have made the trees a little smaller, and the continent names a different color that stands out more, but I realize you are not really going to spend more time on this one, so ignore that :P

Clercon
10-02-2013, 06:55 AM
Great piece! Really nice textures and colors. Personally, I'd have made the trees a little smaller, and the continent names a different color that stands out more, but I realize you are not really going to spend more time on this one, so ignore that :P
Thanks Lingon, and no I'm not spending more time on the map, I've already spent more then enough :)
But thanks for the criticism, it is always something I can brig with me to the next map i make

arsheesh
10-03-2013, 12:30 AM
That turned very nice. Congrats on the commission Clerecon.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

- Max -
10-03-2013, 03:59 AM
Nice one Clercon! The only things I'd comment is the title and compass place ment which both looks a bit stucked in that corner and too close to the landmass. Also the sea and islands names labels are hardly legible.

Clercon
10-03-2013, 08:46 AM
Thanks!
@max, yest there are some things that could improve. The map is however reduced in size before i put it up here. The original meant for printing in A2, so it is quite large, and in that version the labels are much clearer.

craig2010
10-04-2013, 04:05 PM
I like that. I tried to use something similiar in my books, but it was too dark and the lettering too small on e readers. So i'm going with the black and white. Wish I could use this style though.

Clercon
10-05-2013, 05:11 PM
I like that. I tried to use something similiar in my books, but it was too dark and the lettering too small on e readers. So i'm going with the black and white. Wish I could use this style though.
Thanks Craig, and I can understand that it gets dark on an ereader. But the style is really great.

kurtographer
10-06-2013, 03:24 PM
This is Kurtographer. Your map is fine work. Something to be proud of. I enjoyed going over it. Fantastic work.

Clercon
10-07-2013, 05:00 AM
This is Kurtographer. Your map is fine work. Something to be proud of. I enjoyed going over it. Fantastic work.
Thank you kurtographer, I did put a lot of work into the details so I'm glad you like it.