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jdhanka
01-12-2014, 08:21 PM
This is a fantasy map of a random region I made a couple days ago, and I was wondering what you guys think of it. All advice is welcome and I won't take it personally.

My computer doesn't seem to like the insert image button, so here is a link:

My first attempt at a map, tell me what you think. :) - Imgur (http://imgur.com/yNBWuy7)

Jalyha
01-13-2014, 10:51 PM
Hi! This is a very cute map!!

I like the parchment background, and your names are so cool!

I like that you have one of the little villages hidden up almost in the forest.

I think maybe you were being *too* careful with the lines on the mountains... they should be a little bumpy, cause they are rocks, right? :)

And the blue for the lake/river is a little too bright, cause all the other colors are soft. Ummm... and maybe some of the mountains seem to be sitting on top of the hills?

I'm not very good at this, sorry, but that's just what I see. :)

Is it for a game, or a story or just for fun? :)