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KillTheRookie
07-09-2014, 01:04 PM
Hello everyone here are two continents of seven Zlau and Lapideas, in the world I have created called Vitam.

And wanted to know your opinion on them.


Zlau


65625



Lapideas


65626

- Max -
07-09-2014, 01:16 PM
Nice shoe :D :P

KillTheRookie
07-09-2014, 01:34 PM
That is my knee good sir

- Max -
07-09-2014, 02:23 PM
Ooh alright :D

Llannagh
07-09-2014, 04:06 PM
Nice knee! ;)

Anyway, welcome to the guild and have some rep for jumping right in with a map!

A few suggestions, though:

- right now your map suffers from the old "must-fill-every-inch-of-paper-sheet-with-landmass". Give the coastline more water around it. Then you also have more space to vary the coastline, because right now they look a bit too rectangular.
- same thing with the rectangularness goes for the forests. spread them out a bit and let them blend into the countryside. Kudos for all the individual trees, though! ;)

Otherwise you're on a good path! Map away!