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Midgardsormr
01-11-2009, 12:18 AM
Here I go! This time around I'll try to improve on the style I developed for Mennin's Hallow and adapt it for a large-format map. This one is set up at 24 X 36" at 300 dpi, leaving me plenty of room to downsample or chop it up if necessary.

Galerius Hallow is hidden in the forests along the River Galerius, northwest of what remains of the city of Kerus, which fell to the plague fifty years ago. It has a relatively high population of ~350, who are protected behind the confluence of the Galerius river and one of its tributaries, the Frostwater.

The Galerius runs through a small canyon, which is bridged by a single rope bridge and defended by a palisade. The Frostwater joins it in a small waterfall. It is smaller than the Galerius and thus more vulnerable, so it is defended by a rough stone wall.

So far I've got the forest and rock textures set up (and hidden by their respective masks), and a little bit of reference. Yes, it's very ugly. Ultimately, this will actually be two maps: the village and the region that contains it, the one below the other. If I fail to do a good job on the village, I can always cut it in half and still have plenty of pixels to print at 150 dpi.

Hoel
01-11-2009, 08:21 AM
What's up with the attachment? It's just half white half green with some red and yellow lines and some very low res stuff, I think part of a label for a city...

Steel General
01-11-2009, 10:05 AM
Probably just a place holder, looks like he chopped out a piece from another map and just added some simple lines, etc. to indicate what he had in mind.

joćo paulo
01-11-2009, 12:44 PM
The competition has already begun?

Midgardsormr
01-11-2009, 12:59 PM
I told ya it was ugly! The bottom half is going to be the village map, but I haven't started on that part yet. The top half is a blown-up piece of this map:
http://www.cartographersguild.com/album.php?albumid=19&pictureid=114

It'll look better later on, I promise!

And joćo: Yes, it has begun!

Midgardsormr
01-13-2009, 02:02 PM
Okay, I had some annoying stops and starts on this one, mostly because Wilbur didn't like the resolution I was trying to work in, and I was having a hard time coming up with an approach that would give me what I wanted. This isn't quite what I had in mind, but I think it will work out. So, here's the heightmap:

Steel General
01-13-2009, 02:08 PM
Very een-ter-esting, looking forward to seeing more progress Midgard.

Redrobes
01-13-2009, 02:58 PM
That's great starting terrain height map there. Was it completely synthetic or taken from a bit of real world height. There's some really good bits in it. It looks like a real bit of terrain, so whatever you used, whether Wilbur or DEM - its very nice.

Ascension
01-13-2009, 06:43 PM
I'm loving that alluvial fan there in the lower left.

Midgardsormr
01-13-2009, 07:12 PM
It's all synthetic from Wilbur. I did some touching up to get the rivers where I wanted them and to break up the unnatural ridges that Wilbur's fractal noise filter creates. Thanks for the compliments!

mmmmmpig
01-14-2009, 02:13 PM
I am enjoying this one greatly

Midgardsormr
01-19-2009, 01:06 AM
Thanks for the encouragement. It's been slow going what with school projects competing for time. I may not get it finished in time, though I shall give it my best. I've got a lot more of the terrain work done: forest, river, and rocky cliffs. There are a few too many sandbars--I'll go through and erase a lot of them, especially the ones in the pond. I may have to adjust my scale, too. These rivers have run 50 - 70 miles since leaving the mountains; should they be carrying less water? More?

Anyway, once I get the grass in and poke some holes in the forest, I'll probably turn my attention to the village to see if I can get that built and composited prior to the deadline. I don't think I'll be able to do the lower half of the image by then, though, so my submission is going to be only this portion.

So, without further ado:
### Latest WIP ###

Steel General
01-19-2009, 07:52 AM
Coming along nicely, hope you have time to finish it.

Gamerprinter
01-25-2009, 11:49 PM
Hey Midgard - it happens to us all, I've started map challenges, not finished my map, but still got a couple votes anyway. So unless you don't get something started at all, as long as there is some content to vote on - you always have a chance. Thanks for competing no matter what!

GP

Midgardsormr
01-26-2009, 11:44 AM
Thanks, GP. School hit me hard the first two weeks; hopefully the projects don't continue to be so heavy through the entire quarter or I'm going to go insane! This map will undoubtedly get finished eventually, but it might be a while.

Hoel
01-26-2009, 01:32 PM
Very nice texture work there. And the heightmap is so cool.
The only thing I can find to say somthing negative about is the river.. It looks like you used some sort of glass bevel or chrome filter on it and it doesn't look realistic.
Oh and about the textures. I think the green one you have now works better as grass (with a bit of different colors, dry grass on the hills maybe). A forest texture should be more clumpy and vary more in hue, even on this scale.
It may be a feature, but you have some sort of thing on the cliff right on the eastern map edge, it kinda looks like a crack.
Where did you get the rock texture? It works very good

Midgardsormr
01-26-2009, 07:32 PM
I imagine the rock texture came from cgtextures.com. It's the same one I used last year for Mennin's Hallow, so it was still in the folder. I'm not sure which crack you're referring to, but there's one that's part of the texture and one that I missed when I was covering the seams.

There are two effects on the river: one is a very wide outer stroke set to dissolve that makes those sandy banks. The other is an inner glow that creates the sandbars. I think the latter effect is the one that's making it look beveled. Hopefully going in and erasing some of the sand bars will help with that. There are really far too many at the moment, and they shouldn't appear in the lake at the confluence.

I think the trees work much better where they're not covering so much of the landscape. I've experimented with tearing some holes in the canopy, but what I've done so far hasn't looked quite right. Eventually, there won't be any trees in the village area, and they'll be much more sparse in the rain basin to the south. I think I need to look at some aerial photos to get a better sense of real forests. We don't have any where I'm from.

I'll keep your guidance in mind when I enter the next iteration of the map. I'm thinking I might do something with a plasma overlay to add some variance to that texture. I'm also going to chop the scale in half, I think. Or double it? How does that work?

Hoel
01-26-2009, 07:43 PM
Sand banks.. heh. It makes sense, but they do look like glares.
If you add some water texture, or a inner glow to the water layer, they might blend better.

I think you should go down in scale, it's a village and will be very tiny on a ~12 mile map.

Midgardsormr
07-01-2010, 02:44 PM
Due to the incompatibility between the CGTextures.com license and the CC license of the CWBP, this map (unfinished as it is), is withdrawn from inclusion in the Collaborative Worldbuilding Project. The Creative Commons license is unlawful and cannot therefore be enforced. This map is currently All Rights Reserved until such time as it is redrafted or the CGTextures image is relicensed to permit use in a Creative Commons project.

Redrobes
07-01-2010, 02:57 PM
Sure. What textures do you need to replace as I am out and about with my camera all the time and have a pretty good collection of stuff. If you just sub them can you then get the image back up pretty quick again or does it need work on it to put the textures in place ?

Midgardsormr
07-01-2010, 03:13 PM
I'm pretty sure the only one I'll have to replace on this map is the rocky cliffs, but it's going to be awhile before I dig it back out to work on it. I've got a lot on my plate with my last two school terms, and I really don't have time for the mapping at the moment. I think this one will be as simple as swapping out the texture, but Mennin's Hallow will be more difficult since I made some mistakes in my workflow.

Redrobes
07-01-2010, 03:31 PM
I release these as CC BY-NC-SA (Redrobes) to help out.