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gimil*
03-09-2009, 01:04 PM
Think I may as well enter this months competition as well.

Here is where I am just now!

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jfrazierjr
03-09-2009, 01:24 PM
A few comments on your start.



Rivers rarely flow from a lake in more than one place. The inner lake has 6 rivers flowing out to the sea.
You added a lake to the lower section of the map. While this is not explicitly stated in the rules, note that some people may disqualify your map from consideration in their voting due to this. The Community Leaders won't disqualify any maps, but we do make sure before voting commences that the rules of the challenge are restated.
it looks like you have drastically changed the course of the river on the mid right bay as well as the one from the upper right lake inland.

Ascension
03-09-2009, 06:03 PM
The trees look pretty good tho :)

gimil*
03-09-2009, 07:01 PM
You added a lake to the lower section of the map. While this is not explicitly stated in the rules, note that some people may disqualify your map from consideration in their voting due to this. The Community Leaders won't disqualify any maps, but we do make sure before voting commences that the rules of the challenge are restated.


I have took the lake out already for my next draft.


it looks like you have drastically changed the course of the river on the mid right bay as well as the one from the upper right lake inland.

Those have both been mistakenly overlooked. Cheers for pointing them out!

gimil*
03-09-2009, 07:09 PM
Removed lake that I added and also romoved some of the rivers connecting to the central lake. I have also started on some mountains down south which I am not sure will work yet or not.

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