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Drahyden
03-25-2009, 12:49 AM
Hello again my fellow cartographers!!!

I'm back again with another map. This is an other style i've practiced, hope you like it... This is my last creation, no quite for any particular game, i just had a few minutes free. As always, i apreciate feedback:P.

So with no more delays here is it, the Dodoriko Region:;)

See you later8)8)8)

Chaosorcerer
03-25-2009, 03:46 AM
Looks good already! Two things:
- I think the forest would look better if you give the trees trunks.
- I'd soften (the lines of) the mountains. The mountains are now the most prominent objects on the map, while i think the places of interest and the roads should be that.

Think it will look better if you fix these two things! (Although it does look good already;))

Jykke
03-25-2009, 04:04 AM
I don't think the forest is the biggest issue here. I had to take a few seconds and just look at the map to realize those brownish sections were mountains (labelling helped also) :D. Maybe you should try building the mountains so that the height field is more logical, just a thought :). What I especially liked about this map, is the style of the torn paper & texture of it (maybe you could smoothen the edges just a bit). With more time you could easily take this style a bit further and produce great unique style maps.

Drahyden
03-25-2009, 05:15 PM
Thanks for the replies, here, i tryed to pull something out how's this?:?:

Minor changes, some altitude texture to the mountains, and the tree trunks ;)

Thanks for watching, feedback, really improves my map making, because in want to know where i could be better.

See you soon:):compass:8)8)8)

Drahyden
03-25-2009, 06:01 PM
Not uploaded yet...
Embarrasing...:o:mrgreen::mrgreen::mrgreen:

MadLetter
03-25-2009, 06:04 PM
Make the trunks a little bigger, they are barely visible. Beyond that the map is awesome! :D