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MysticMagellan
09-03-2009, 02:05 AM
Hi everyone. Now that the Oten-Jo challenge is over I wanted to post a near-finished alternate version of my entry. When I was researching old Japanese maps I saw a few things I thought were very cool, and this map takes its inspiration from some of them. I'd like to post it in finished maps, but would enjoy any comments before I do.

Gamerprinter
09-03-2009, 03:02 AM
That looks awesome, MM. I'd Rep you, but I already did in the challenge! Very authentic feel in this one.

GP

Gandwarf
09-03-2009, 04:41 AM
Very nice indeed!

Steel General
09-03-2009, 11:47 AM
Neat stuff...

Avulsion
09-03-2009, 05:48 PM
Beautiful! I really like the labels and colors. I think I might even like this version better.

If you're going for a very "clean" look, you succeeded. If you want it to have more "realism", you could try applying more texture to the farm fields and water areas. I especially noticed the difference between this version and the full color version in regards to the river. I really like the blue river and ripples it has in your Challenge version better.

To me, it is an interesting hybrid in appearing between hand-drawn and computer-drawn.

MysticMagellan
09-03-2009, 07:15 PM
I am going for a clean look and I thought hard about the river for this version. I'll add it back in for a comparison a little later.

MysticMagellan
09-07-2009, 01:00 AM
Avulsion wanted to see a version of this with the river ripples added back in. Any comments on comparing both versions?

Coyotemax
09-07-2009, 01:48 AM
Definitely better with the ripples, I think.

Very nice!

mearrin69
09-11-2009, 11:34 AM
I love the style of this map. Beautiful work!

The only improvement I possibly suggest is in the shadowing of the roofs and at the base of the buildings. On the roofs, it seems to me that the shade should be darkest on the back slopes facing directly away from the light source and lighter as they rotate towards the source. Also, it looks like there is a tiny shadow under each building but they seem to be orthagonal to the building base rather than pointing in the same direction - away from the light source. The effect is to make it difficult to tell from which direction the light is coming.

Looking forward to checking out more of your stuff.
M

Karro
09-11-2009, 01:21 PM
I'm not entirely sure it's really all that better with the ripples than without. Without you get a nice, clean look that seems a bit more realistic from the perspective of this being a handdrawn or inked map. Either way, though, it looks great.

jerriecan
09-11-2009, 02:31 PM
Beautiful work! :)

pipolaki
10-09-2009, 12:23 PM
Wow. Awsome !!!
I'm going to use this map in my next role playing game session.
I'm playing in Antic China so... if someone knows where I kind find more chinese map, I will be very grateful.

Gamerprinter
10-09-2009, 01:12 PM
Wow. Awsome !!!
I'm going to use this map in my next role playing game session.
I'm playing in Antic China so... if someone knows where I kind find more chinese map, I will be very grateful.

Well, this is more a Japanese map, than Chinese, but this map is an extension of the July Mapping Challenge, where I sponsored the prize for entries towards my Japanese setting: Kaidan. So if you look in the July Mapping Challenge entries, you'll find a bunch of different versions of the same town. Since all maps are different, you have many choices for cities anyway.

I've got other map posted here intended for use in Kaidan as well, including Mountain Passes, Island maps, and many locations from taverns to country inns. Just go to the Search link and type in "Kaidan", you should find a bunch of maps listed under that. Again, these are all for my commercial Japanese setting, but you can use them for personal use.

GP

Juggernaut1981
10-13-2009, 07:37 PM
Just thought I'd mention... as one of the others working on Kaidan... Consider yourself Rep-Whacked... apologies if my Rep-Fu is not very strong.