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Croquelune
12-18-2009, 03:03 PM
My first hand-draw map : this is a region of a world call Royaumes d'AxaŽl (in english Realms of AxaŽl), I use it for a Role Play forum. Enjoy and give me your advice please !

Rythal
12-18-2009, 04:47 PM
looks pretty good.

My main complaint would have to be that the shading on the mountains is inconsistent, making it feel kind of.... weird.

also, you have a few river infractions, which I'm sure will be brought up by the more "qualified" members *coughriverpolicecough*

Croquelune
12-18-2009, 04:54 PM
I aggree with you for the rivers infractions, but the original map is not mine and I can't remove it ;(... And for the mountains...the moutains x) I can't speak about that, it was horrible to draw. I promise you I will do better next time ^^, the work is in progress.

Ascension
12-18-2009, 07:10 PM
The mountains are fairly simple but hopefully you can add a little bit of artistry to them. The forests are okay but the treetops get kind of flat. The part in the bottom right looks good for the most part but there are some flat spots there as well...make them rounder. I've attached a pic of my own quick handiwork to help guide you.

Croquelune
12-18-2009, 07:39 PM
Oh thanks it's very better than mine.