Another Stab at a Galaxy

[The Cartographist]

Stars! I need more stars!

I started this as a "Clear My Mind" exercise several hours ago.

It wasn't until just several minutes ago that I saw Andartar's Eohl Galactic Chart--that is truly an amazing piece of work. Alas, mine is not.

But I figured that I'd post it anyway in the hopes of receiving any feedback from the community. Be gentle, please.

"Tim"

[Ascension]

Artsy and pretty cool. I'd only make two changes at this point. The one area that looks very much like a chunk just to the right of center...I'd erase some stars there to reduce the shape-iness of that part. And then I'd just add a faint outer glow around the stars to give them a halo effect.