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Redrobes
02-23-2010, 07:11 PM
So I really should be doing other work but this challenge did sound fun and I like some of the prizes so what they hey...

Its a bit aimless this one and I am sure that theres better art and story but its all I could come up with at short notice. So C&Cs time. Any spelling errors and other comments please.

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Rythal
02-23-2010, 08:57 PM
that hermit is a champ.

C&C: the text is a bit plain, and the rock slide/stalagmite/ rocks all dont really fit the grainy background.

That said, I think you could almost make this slightly funny (3 witches and a hermit has a lot of potential)... :P

Ascension
02-24-2010, 01:05 AM
Come and knock on our door, we've been waiting for you. Where the kisses are hers and hers and his....blah blah blah

Al. I. Cuza
02-24-2010, 02:45 AM
Other than the fact that the witches may never even see the adventurers, nice map.

Map Vandal
02-24-2010, 11:22 AM
The "Many remains of various races," ends with a comma so it looks like you are missing something.

Nice map.

Redrobes
02-24-2010, 01:00 PM
Thanks for the comments ill see about fixing some of them.

The idea of the map is that the hermit and witches never meet because of the rock slide in the middle and barricaded tunnel but if the PC's are to get to the other side then they have to open that up and go through the unused bit and out the other side. I would agree that its a bit of a lame idea. I guess it could be funny in several ways but ill leave that up to the GM. I tried to keep the description loose so that its pretty open to interpretation and stat generation.

Redrobes
02-25-2010, 03:24 PM
Another attempt. I made some of the text bigger, fixed the comma, changed the icon for the stalagmites and added a little more fluff to it here and there but nothing too drastic. I think ill be out of time so this is probably it. I have got a nice script to add text to maps in any font but I used this one and I haven't the time to go back and redo it all again so I think ill just have to live with it. Also I think a clean font will print better but that's just making excuses for myself.

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Redrobes
02-25-2010, 06:20 PM
Kensata is linking my entry here which is really supposed to be this one for his compo...

http://www.viewing.ltd.uk/Temp/OnePageDungeon/index.htm

Immolate
02-27-2010, 12:09 PM
I love it when a minimalist approach works and this one does Red Robes. I've never been good at keeping things simple. Great entry!