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    Under "Turn Sequence": "calalry" should probably be "cavalry", "a players turn" s/b "a player's turn", looks like you have an extra space between "all" and "of his flipped".

    Under "Movement": "You many move" s/b "You may move", missed capitalizing "flipped" at start of sentence.

    Under "Attack": "is equal or greater than" s/b "is equal to or greater than","the the target" s/b "the target" or maybe "then the target", remove period before "(choice of defender)", "The" in "If The target unit" should not be capitalized.

    Under "Special rules": capitalize "rules" in section title for consistency, "Only" should not be capitalized.

    Standardize to spelling either "defense" or "defence".

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    Doh! OK, thanks for pointing those out. Obviously I was in too much of a rush.

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    I (hopefully) have now corrected all the typos. I also re-sized the map so that it can be easily printed out onto standard letter sized paper. The map had to be shrunk down a bit to fit, so I shrank the counters down a tad also. Now there is an additional page just for the rules. I am declaring this one Done!
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    I uploaded those files to BoardGameGeek.com and someone has already built a copy of the game! Looks like the colours worked out fine (sometimes the printers dont print the colours I see on the screen, but in this case what I see is what you get).

    I gotta get my own copy made up now...
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    I really like the overall look, feel and structure of this wargame.....it has the simplicity of what some are calling a 'pocket wargame'...but also reflects the attributes of this conflict. Really nice job on the graphics Tim - very professional work.

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