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    Yep, the first map was good, but this one is better. Well Done!!

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    Thanks so much for all the feedback
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    Yes the new enviroment looks much more interesting, dont overdo contrasting trees.

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    It looks like you had a lot of friends helping!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    It looks like you had a lot of friends helping!
    It takes a village to raise a castle....
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    Jt - one thing. The wooden posts look a bit too big - the fact that the wood-grain is visible feels wrong, particularly the posts (if that is what they are) holding up the bales of hay. Also those bales of hay should have a little shadowing along their western side from the wall. Ditto the water trough on the other side (you should place these objects on the same level as the roofs, so that they are below your shadow layer).

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    Great map. I agree with the others. Redoing it really paid off. The trees look more interesting and natural now. Well done!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jacktannery View Post
    Jt - one thing. The wooden posts look a bit too big - the fact that the wood-grain is visible feels wrong, particularly the posts (if that is what they are) holding up the bales of hay. Also those bales of hay should have a little shadowing along their western side from the wall. Ditto the water trough on the other side (you should place these objects on the same level as the roofs, so that they are below your shadow layer).
    Thanks for confirming my suspicions about those posts. I'd been staring at them for a while thinking that something was "off" The wood grain wouldn't be visible at this scale. I made them smaller and got rid of the wood grain as well. Thanks for the shadow suggestions. I just plain missed them. Another case of looking at something for so long and not seeing it. Thanks so much for all the help.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lyandra View Post
    Great map. I agree with the others. Redoing it really paid off. The trees look more interesting and natural now. Well done!
    Thanks so much. And thank you for all the feedback.

    Here is an updated version with the (hopefully) last of the issues addressed. As always feedback is requested and appreciated

    Wolves Fall Castle-new-wolves-fall-castle.jpg
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    Spot on jt.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jacktannery View Post
    Spot on jt.
    Thanks. It would have never gotten to where it is without all of your help
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