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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogie View Post
    The pine floorboards look much better and the shadows really add a lot to the depth, nice work. I like the angled roof, the only suggestion on that would be that the edges are to perfectly cut off. It would look even better if the edge were slightly irregular.

    Final suggestion is the railing is to plain. The railing shadow looks good but maybe add posts to the railing itself. Something like this for example: Attachment 53045

    Thanks for both the kind words and the advices.

    I think I see what you mean about the roof, I will try to go back and "cut" it into a wave shape that suggests that various tiles are interlocking... That's a good advice.

    I see what you mean about the railling... I'll see what I can do. at worst, I will steal the example you posted and spam multiple instance of it... I'll try to have an updated version posted tomorrow...

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    Ok, finally, I got a bit of time to try my hands at this.
    Got some posts on top of the railing and updated the railing shadows (its probably not noticeable but I'll know I did it).

    As for the roof... I am not sure, I did both the edges and the end of the left roof and am not very happy with it, so, on the right, I only did the end part, what do you guys think?

    WIP: A large inn-sleepys-inn-roof-towers.png

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    Yup, the posts do look better. I like the right roof better than the left. The upper left roof edge is to irregular.

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    Fair enough... You think I should stick to only modifying the end or just not overdo the irregular as much?

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    Ok, so I did update the roof.

    Now, only the edges are irregular, I think it looks better that way...

    WIP: A large inn-sleepy-cavalier-inn-roof-towers.png

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    Excellent. Looks great!

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    Danke sehr, I guess I will restart a thread in the finished project sub-section...


    Thanks for all your advices!

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