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    There is a starfield, though maybe it needs a bit more.

    hmmm... the more I look at this the more I think maybe I should've just left this on the proverbial scrap-heap. *shrugs* I'll let it percolate a bit longer.
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    Other random thoughts:

    #1 Are the moon phases supposed to be "cross paired" or "in sequence"... if they were supposed to be sequenced then they're off... (swap one of the diagonal pairs and it works, I'd suggest 1-right of the paw and 1-left of the hand be swapped)

    #2 The "base platform shadow" seems to make it "fuzz/blur out". Putting a highlighting edge on the bottom level of the platform may help make it feel better.

    #3 Intersperse the moon phases with statues maybe?

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    Inspiring stuff coming up...Well it inspired me to do some quick 3D modelling...hopefully looking at it from different perspectives will fire you up!
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    Thanks both of you, all great ideas.

    I played around with some ideas last night but it all looked like crap to me so I scrapped them.
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    After much deliberation and more than a half dozen different attempts to finish, I officially am scrapping this one.

    Thanks again to everyone who made suggestions, etc.

    If someone wants to 'run with it' feel free.
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    Shame! It was lookin' cool too. (Although I noticed the out-of-sequence phases too.)

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