Looks pretty good to me. I like those portals.
This is a map I will be using for my D&D 4E group. It's The Mortuary from the old 2nd Edition D&D setting Planescape module called "The Eternal Boundary". It's not perfect but I think it will work. There are 2 more levels that I am working on but I wanted to share what I had so far. The glowing stones are portals that the dustmen place the bodies in to send to different planes. The other two levels will have less empty space.
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Enjoy,
Nick
Looks pretty good to me. I like those portals.
If the radiance of a thousand suns was to burst at once into the sky, that would be like the splendor of the Mighty One...I am become Death, the Shatterer of worlds.
-J. Robert Oppenheimer (father of the atom bomb) alluding to The Bhagavad Gita (Chapter 11, Verse 32)
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Very original design... would be cool to see the building from thee outside.
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