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    Wip WIP Grave of the Ashwitcher

    Hi all,

    I am working on the following map, the grave of a half-ash-dragon general that is flooded with his undead minions.

    I will post further progress and you all feel free to comment if you have ideas or suggestions.

    WIP Grave of the Ashwitcher-dungeonii.jpg

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    This is a nice map but the only thing I would suggest is if the "rock/earth fill" was toned down a bit to have a smaller range of lightness. The corridors are the focus of dungeon maps and the fill is basically just negative space so you don't want it to be too distracting. You want people to see the corridors and rooms.

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    I agree with Larb: reduce the contrast of the "exterior" to focus attention on the "interior". Otherwise, looks pretty good.

    Cheers,
    -Arsheesh

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    Thanks for the advice, I Will do this! My goal was to let the "outsides" look like ash clouds, but I will be playing with contrast a little.

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