Welcome to the guild true-chaotic! Looks good. I would try to make the tears in the pages a bit more irregular though. They all look like they were cut by scissors rather than torn. Of course, if this is what your after, then they are perfect. Second, I assume this is lying on a table? If so, your wood grain seems a bit orangish.
I like how the lines are kind of fuzzy and a bit wavy, like it might have been hand sketched (perhaps by someone drinking and drawing at the same time...heh)