I like the colors and most of the elements. The rivers have a look I don't like. They look more like big tubes than rivers to me. Also, the river system is pretty crazy. Rivers that go nowhere without apparent reason, lakes with multiple outflows, rivers connecting what appear to be ocean on both sides... you should read http://www.cartographersguild.com/sh...he-right-place. The names are good and the labels mostly very nice, although the red lettering and the sea doesn't seem to be interacting well. Have you got an effect around the text there? The water just around the text looks bad if you look closely.