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    Map City of Broons

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    Looks good. I like the city walls and the town layout. I'd recommend varying the size of blocks inside the town, and the houses themselves. At the moment it looks like everything within the city walls is the same size which implies the same economic level everywhere. Also, the roads inside the city are massive compared to the roads outside the walls. I'd expect roads outside to be wider, as space within the city walls is at a premium.

    Love the colour scheme and the details in the farmland too. Very nice!
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    Yeah this is great Sap. I especially like the outside areas with the small farming buildings and whatnot.
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    Nothing like good farmilng land outside a walled city. Looks great!

    Great comments Torstan, didn't noticed it until you mentioned it, you have quite the trained eye!

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    Thank you guys!

    @Torstan: really good comments, hadn't noticed the streets and the houses issues. I will take care of these in the next town map.

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    Cool stuff Sap!
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    Thanx, Steel General!

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    I like the map - my critique is that I hate that font, it's too.... ordinary? uninteresting? Also, I read the name as "City of Boons", but that's my mental problem :-)

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    Quote Originally Posted by bartmoss View Post
    I like the map - my critique is that I hate that font, it's too.... ordinary? uninteresting? Also, I read the name as "City of Boons", but that's my mental problem :-)
    I tried various fonts before I decided for this one. I think it fits well with the style of the map. Matter of taste.

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