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    Default Hero's End

    Welp, here's my third map evar. This one was done with the Saderan Tutorial in Photoshop CS5. The tut was super-clear and awesome. My final result doesn't match the style from the tut exactly, but I'm still pleased with it.

    Things I'm not 100% happy with:

    * The rivers don't pop as much as they should. Not sure why.
    * The forest areas don't have clear boundaries from the grasslands. I had a little trouble with that step, but was pretty happy with the shrubby look I got out of it anyways.

    I'm open to any and all feedback, so please give it if you have it! I may or may not make changes to this map since I'm eager to keep running through tutorials, but I'd really like to hear what could be improved.

    Thanks!
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    Hi there MC. Well it looks pretty good to me. Unfortunately, I don't own Photoshop and so have never had the opportunity to try out this tutorial. So I don't know how to advise you on your questions. What you are doing is good though: that is, it's a good idea to try out several different tutorials/mapping styles so that (a) you gain knowledge of several different methods of mapmaking, and (b) this gives you the opportunity to develop your own unique style as well.

    Cheers,
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    Looks good for a first try in this style.
    You can use a darker blue for the rivers, that should increase the visibility.
    For the forest the use of different brushes can give you other results for their edges. A dropshadow can sometimes help, too.
    Some empty space for a map in general (no cities etc), but as you said, you are still working on your skills. Keep it up!
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    This is very good for a first try, my first Saderan tutorial map looked worse (and don't bother trying to find it here on the guild, I never posted it ) Keep up the good work.
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    Thanks dudes! Much appreciated.

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