Nice job, especially for starters. I predict you'll get really good at this. It's already way better than most folks' first maps!
What size page are these for? You've done well at not overcomplicating something that's destined for smallish book dimensions. Some of the labels could stand moving to leave more clearance from features - Val'Fi a bit to the NNW, maybe.
Rep for boldness (map in first post) but these deserve a bit anyway - they're good maps.