Hey, great work! I like the style. My own preference might be to bring down the opacity on the land masses a little and I think the texture of the paper is just a bit too intense, maybe reduce the depth of it?
Also, a higher resolution image would be cool, 'cause then I could have a good look at your details! Thanks for posting this.
Hey thanks! Yeah, it's not perfect but I plan on doing another version in the future.
To this very day a favorite exclamation between me and the wife is "damn you monkeybird!" I agree with Meshon, you paper is worth spending some more time, your colors seem a bit over saturated and clean compared to the writing surface. Some navigation lines would be a nice touch also. You've got a good start though with some fun features.