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  1. 11-09-2006, 01:13 PM #1
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    Post The Kingdoms of Merceddia campaign maps

    hey folks, new to the boards. figured i would post my campaign maps here for critiques. here you go.

    the first is the entire map, which i've done in an URL because i don't want to kill the post size.

    the second is the eastern half, and the third is the west.

    these were originally black and white hand drawn and i went back and added the colors in corel draw. let me know what you think, huh?

    http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...kengardall.jpg

    http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1...y/drakold4.jpg

    http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f1.../drakold2a.jpg
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  2. 11-09-2006, 10:55 PM #2
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    Looks good overall, but there are two things that I think could improve it. The first is the text. It really needs something behind/around it to set it off from the darker backgrounds especially in the mountains. The second are the rivers. The blue is "too high" if that makes sense. If you lower its opacity it should "lower" the appearance of the rivers.
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  3. 11-11-2006, 11:47 PM #3
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    I see what RP is talking about, but other than that it looks GREAT. Corel steps up again!
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  4. 11-15-2006, 01:49 PM #4
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    I like the muted pallete a lot. Agree about the text readability, but they're still beautiful.
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  5. 11-26-2006, 07:48 PM #5
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    Lovely maps. Thank you!

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  6. 11-27-2006, 04:11 AM #6
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    Lovely work
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  7. 11-12-2011, 11:48 AM #7
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    Whats the world its created for? Looks good!
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  8. 11-13-2011, 03:25 AM #8
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    I like it too, such a nice and simple map.
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  9. 11-13-2011, 07:34 AM #9
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    Holy Threadomancy Batman!
    My Finished Maps | My Challenge Maps | Ghoraja Juun, my largely stagnated campaign setting.

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