Congrats on your first map.
It has potential, but for me, the one thing that is distracting, is the sheer volume of roads and paths compared to the size of the community. As it stands, it is easy to see it was made with the City Maker online applet.
I think if you were to go over the map, and remove some of the extraneous roads you would get a more organic looking city.
Good first attempt tho! Congrats!