I like it. Lovely colour choice for the grass.
I'd have gone for a less vivid blue, but it does stand out.
On a separate note - the map turnover had no mountains or hills on it. It also didn't show roads. Now roads and hills you can probably get away with just adding in, but a mountain range is going to be a major addition that changes things. Probably best not to throw in a mountain range for artistic merit!
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