Much much much much better...fits in with the drawn style of the rest of the map. Maybe you could find a good hand-writing font too (shrug) or maybe that might be overkill...I can't seem to visualize at the moment.
If the radiance of a thousand suns was to burst at once into the sky, that would be like the splendor of the Mighty One...I am become Death, the Shatterer of worlds.
-J. Robert Oppenheimer (father of the atom bomb) alluding to The Bhagavad Gita (Chapter 11, Verse 32)
My Maps ~ My Brushes ~ My Tutorials ~ My Challenge Maps
*mutters something about 4e being too videogamey*
That aside though, I'm liking your artwork.
So, for giggles here is my CC3 mapped adventure I put my players through earlier last year. It becomes very....rough at the end of the adventure, but hey. Was fun writing it.
That is a very nice final product.
Of course, I feel like I should shoot for this when create my own adventures now. So thanks for that
It does look like one of those supplements you would buy in the gameshop too.
Wouldn't take much polishing to make that publishable. If I was still running campaigns, I'd buy it.
My finished maps
"...sometimes the most efficient way to make something look drawn by hand is to simply draw it by hand..."