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    Here is my current outline for Trident City, the setting of the fantasy/superhero setting I am writing. The city is based at the fork of a major river, near the borders of three nations. The city originally began as a collection of close fishing communities. As river travel and trade grew, it quickly expanded, becoming three close cities across the river and it's forks, and then into one metropolis. The territory belonged to one of the nations, but it was left largely alone and unoccupied, due to tensions between the nations and not wanting to appear as if they were militarizing the river region. Eventually, Trident City grew too big to be ignored and the nation tried to formally take it over for its economic and strategic value. The city, along with the other two neighboring nations, who wanted the city to remain neutral and indepedent for the sake of trade and keeping the staus quo. They were able to stave off the assault after a year-long siege. It's been 80 years since the war ended and the city has continued to build up and the districts have developed their own character. A number of districts were shaped by the war and continue to exist influenced by the past events. Each district has its own overall economic station and a few are very specialized.

    Shieldhaven, for example, is made up of the military barracks along the east wall, where the siege took place, as well as residential areas that survived the siege. The Borricks are a huge slum area. Formerly called the Barricks, it was a district that served as a home for refugees from outside the walls and citizens from the eastern part of the city during the war. After the war ended, many had to home to go back to and no money to rebuild and so they stayed. They city has yet to build up the resources to demolish and rebuild the entire district, and so it remains a labyrinthine district of crime and squalor. Bruston, derived from its former nickname of Brutestown, is the western barracks district and where the soldires assigned to regulate the Barracks during the war were stationed. Pitchbrune is the industrial area, containing ore refineries and large-scale smithing operations. And so on.

    I am still thinking of adjusting the district sizes. I reduced a few already that seemed too big for what they were and others have grown in the process. Crenton, for example, seems too large now and I'm considering splitting it into two smaller districts.

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    It's got potential. I don't think there's anything wrong with variable district sizes... They'd naturally do that if, say there's a war brewing; the military and metal-working districts might flow over into the surrounding areas. There's one major issue I see, that you may want to fix. When the East and West forks merge into one river, you'll probably get a wider river.

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    Thanks for the input. I agree, although the river is splitting, coming down from the north, not merging. In my larger current image, which I didn't attach due to its size, I've reduced the fork's width, but not by much. The river is deeper where the city proper is and then hits a shallower point as the east fork diverges, hence it is still a bit wider, but the water volume is constant.

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    I've finally finished the layout of the major streets. I haven't, however, placed any back alleys and small side streets, yet, and I'm not sure how deep I'll get into that anyway. After hedging for a long time as to how to go about it, I decided to go with a series of main streets, which would be the original roads between the communities, going to and from each other, then work off of them in a spontaneous way, reflecting the gradual spreading out and merging of the areas. This gives it that "kind of organized/kind of random" layout that most surviving pre-18th century cities, like Paris and Boston, seem to have. I was amazed at how quickly it began to flow once I started.

    I'll be working on the docks next.
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    Ah, I see. Okay then. =)

    Nice job with the street lines.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mayhem66 View Post
    Thanks for the input. I agree, although the river is splitting, coming down from the north, not merging. In my larger current image, which I didn't attach due to its size, I've reduced the fork's width, but not by much. The river is deeper where the city proper is and then hits a shallower point as the east fork diverges, hence it is still a bit wider, but the water volume is constant.
    Looking good so far except for this: unless one of the forks is actively managed (dredged out, reinforced, etc.) you won't get a river splitting like this. Rivers join; they don't split unless you're dealing with a delta or man-made channels. See the How to get your rivers in the right place sticky in the tutorial section for details.

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    The southern landmass contains a couple large granite deposits, one of which is at the northern tip. The other is in Whitecrest to the southeast. The looser rock and earth to either side eroded faster, causing the river to split at that point. That's what I'm going with, anyway.

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