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    Very nice improvement, I like your zodiac symbols too by the way!
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    Thanks Ilanthar! Soon I am also going to map out the land of Odvaha and that map will have a few more of the same style symbols as well.

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    I wish my constellations could be that good

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    Jalyha, I'm sure your constellations are great!

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    Lol, they're like... a few sad little lines... it's in my avatar picture :/
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    I like your avatar picture Jalyha.
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    Very good work Domino44! The red cloud is the best part IMO, it looks just plain gorgeous. I think the black outline round the hemisphere could be improved if it were a bit thicker though. Also there're some typos in the text that you might want to correct for the final version

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    A few typos was a nice way to put it… there were a lot of typos… thanks for pointing that out.

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    I fixed the typos if I missed any let me know.

    Odvaha sky (star map)-star-map-recovered.fixed.png
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    Meh. Mine's just dots and lines I'll fix it someday.

    I don't see any more typos... I did notice, "The Duck" ... the lettering seems to curve *away* from the constellation. I just don't know if that's intentional.
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