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Thread: June/ July Entry. A Vampire Lair

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    I reposted...see the WIP below
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    hey.. thats my basement... *lol* ... looking really good
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    Cheers, Blue Ears!
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    Nice. It is a modern vampire, who sleeps in a bed? A pompous coffin in the basement will frighten the victims too

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    I am saving that for last. He has a special trick to avoid the coffin being found.
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    uh... exiting... is it a transformer coffin... turns into a rockingchair?
    and by the way - if I were a vampire, I would so sleep in a bed
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    Doesn't look too dark to me, Aval, looks good!

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    I've added a few more things and made an attempt at laying it out on a single page. Feedback would be appreciated.

    The text will be about the lord and the various nefarious vices he enjoys; spying on bed rooms and bath rooms, kidnapping city socialites, chopping up people, feeding people to other people, fiendinsh experiments and feeding on the blood of his captives.

    sorry its not very printer friendy



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    The basement shouldn't be darker. Even now it is hard to recognise some things. I hope you will label some rooms or areas in the basement too, so you have an equal appearance in both maps. Looking forward to the story.

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    I found myself squinting to see more of the shapes that seem to fade off into the darkness on the basement....is it too dark? I dunno, but there is something to be said for making viewers work to see what's in there, it adds to the fear.
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