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Thread: January 2011 Challenge - Escape the Estate

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    This turned out excellent, LW! Just found a couple of typos in the flavor text ... "I never thoughT this would ..." in the first sentence, and in the last sentence "a golems" should probably be either "the golems" or "a golem"

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    Nice catch, completely missed those. I'll fix them and update the post, thnx.

    EDIT: Typos fixed.

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    Very nice, although there is a period missing at the end of the text.

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