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    Very nice! However, it appears you've got the numbers on the key mixed up (or those towers just have very strange roofs).

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    You're absolutely right haha. Was too tired to work further obviously.
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    This looks pretty darn good, dude. Argh, tough competition this month...
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    All decor, labeling and such is complete now. Still need to furnish a bit. Let me know if theres anything I can do to tweak this.

    ### Latest WIP ###
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    Stunning. I wouldn't add or change a thing. Simply awesome Geamon.
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    Very minor thing here, but the text looks very crisp so maybe a slight blur might make it look more hand-lettered...or a tiny dark outer glow. Also the white space behind the lettering could be muted a tad. Like I said, very minor, so if you don't want to fiddle with it anymore then I'm fine with how it is.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ascension View Post
    Very minor thing here, but the text looks very crisp so maybe a slight blur might make it look more hand-lettered...or a tiny dark outer glow. Also the white space behind the lettering could be muted a tad. Like I said, very minor, so if you don't want to fiddle with it anymore then I'm fine with how it is.
    I agree with all of this. Good job!

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    You've two "it's" for "its" errors in the bottom text. Also the "in" after "Cursed" should be deleted.

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    It looks great Geamon, I especially like the texture you've used for the open areas in the ground floor. I'm probably being a bit thick but I'm finding it difficult to work out what is where on the map. For example, the inside of the chapel is detailed in the inset, but the barracks seem to be just under the chapel roof in the main drawing. Also, I can't find any locators for the western and eastern towers in the 'main map'.

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    Final revision, wifey has forbidden me from touching it further. haha

    ### Latest WIP ###
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