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    Four errors, all transpositions of adjacent letters:

    Gatsbridge - "releif" s/b "relief"
    Second line of main text: "Alroian" s/b "Alorian"
    4.22, last line - "respectively" misspelled
    4.24, third line - "capitulated" misspelled

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    Thanks rdan....I think I may be becoming dyslexic in my advancing years!

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    Dyslexic or not, that's looking pretty sharp, ravs!

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    That looks very good man! Somehow the image only loads half-way for me, but that may be my browser.. cheers, DJ
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    Cheers DJ, had a quick look at yours (really glad you stepped in this month - so many people have withdrawn) and frame looks just beautiful. Can't wait to see the rest of it, I'm sure it'll be another DJ special!!! I love the mushroom cloud!

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